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Post by OrochiGeese on Nov 5, 2009 21:12:21 GMT -5
Ni San-Dan bringing the FIYAH!! Loved the multi-person approach there as it made perfect sense for the story with DPT! They are on edge with DPT's behaviour and he better watch himself And not just cause they may know where he lives and H. might be watching him shower ;D ;D
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Post by OrochiGeese on Nov 6, 2009 1:24:37 GMT -5
Sonic Death has entered the Arena Great promo, DPT, and the stakes have just risen. (Shhh, no one tell Furis ;D)I love how personal this feud has been from the start and it just keeps getting stiffer (Shh, no one tell Sandy Morton )
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greatmuta2
Dark Matter
Earl of Stroheim
I'll chisel your gravestone.
Posts: 24
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Post by greatmuta2 on Nov 10, 2009 3:27:19 GMT -5
just put my first rp sorry if its a little weak still learning
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Post by OrochiGeese on Nov 10, 2009 3:49:04 GMT -5
You introduced yourself and got across the main idea of your character and that's good. Everyone gets better with RP's over time. Plus there are some pretty amusing lines in yours:
Note to UBL wrestlers: Your time for looking fancy is over. Adjust or learn the meaning of regret.
Manfred: "FANCY GHOST!"
;D
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Post by budnc6721 on Nov 12, 2009 12:42:43 GMT -5
DPT is all types of fancy. He is not scared of some hill billy named scoot.
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Post by Tommy Perfect on Nov 14, 2009 18:17:03 GMT -5
Orochi writes extravagant dialogue. It's always believable. Much better than mine. I feel I sometimes spend more time on the story, and to little on dialogue.
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Post by motosada on Nov 14, 2009 18:56:29 GMT -5
A fat Japanese guy? I'd make a joke about Nicole eating him for lunch, but I don't think she likes sushi...
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Post by OrochiGeese on Nov 14, 2009 20:02:52 GMT -5
A fat Japanese guy? I'd make a joke about Nicole eating him for lunch, but I don't think she likes sushi... LOL he's not fat he's broad/wide I'm gonna post his bio soon to show his full story but here's a pic in the meantime: Orochi writes extravagant dialogue. It's always believable. Much better than mine. I feel I sometimes spend more time on the story, and to little on dialogue. Thanks! I actually used to do the same thing - I focused much more on narrative and exposition and too little on dialogue. You gotta do what feels natural for you though and over time you may find that you adjust things. The most important thing is what works for each specific promo Telling the intro story of Tommy Perfect seemed to require more narrative then dialogue in my opinion.
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Post by motosada on Nov 14, 2009 22:27:11 GMT -5
Ha. I just saw the profile for your Binary Beats robot fella. Sounds like he needs to be coming to the ring via some good ol' Optimus Rhyme, man.
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Post by OrochiGeese on Nov 15, 2009 9:40:52 GMT -5
There are actually three robots. 2 "male" and 1 "female" for LAWL ;D Optimus Rhyme sounds like a good idea even without me ever having heard it, LOL I'll google that up and see what I come up with. I'm using some text->speech program for their promos
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Post by budnc6721 on Nov 18, 2009 9:34:11 GMT -5
Anyone else loving tommy perfects promo's?
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Post by Tommy Perfect on Nov 18, 2009 10:10:51 GMT -5
Anyone else loving tommy perfects promo's? Thank you! ;D
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Post by OrochiGeese on Nov 21, 2009 17:17:20 GMT -5
That was epic, Damb Seriously - do not enflame Damb's passions OR ELSE
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Post by motosada on Nov 22, 2009 2:11:00 GMT -5
"Cockgargling fuckstocking" might be the greatest insult I have ever heard.
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Post by Tommy Perfect on Nov 30, 2009 15:45:48 GMT -5
Yes! New Orohi-O TV show!
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